Adding onto Chapter 1

[Author's Notes] Ugh, just realized that what I needed to put in is actually part of Chapter 1. God, I hate writing sometimes. People have asked me in the past where I break up the paragraphs, the chapters. I likened it to this: You know how you put a comma in when you take a breath in your sentences? Well, the paragraph and chapter changes come when you take a breath in your ideas.

And since I'm writing about how Barbara got to Hong Kong (Oh, it needs to be established I think that she's from Shanghai), there's no pause in idea.